Post by Active Engaged on Jan 29, 2010 17:42:18 GMT
As always, I read and review. Kinda like a commentary. So yeah, I'll write down my thoughts as I go.
- The episode starts on a high. I really like the new character you've brought it, and the way you've brought her in. It's nice knowing the Charmed ones actually have friends, even if they are witches in need.
- Is The Third Phoebe? As in, the third born. If so, then I like how impersonal and profession the Suit and M.E are. It's creepy.
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This way, we can ensure the transition from her old life to her new one is as smooth as possible, and you can establish contact with your trustee.
Arcas meeting Phoebe. I'm guessing this is going to be the start of Phoebe's love story.
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Ex plagiarius. Ego voco vos.Famulor mihi.
I only quoted this part but I am referring to the entire scene. Creepy and dark. Just how I like it! It was also very well written for script and I like that you're pushing past the script-format limits. But yeah, I always loved it when dark magic was used in Charmed and I like to see you're exploring that part of the show. The scene also felt very Supernatural-y, so now I see what you meant when you mentioned that BAM was Charmed meets SPN.
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You heard me. Ever since I started working here you've been rude and..
I really love this side of Prue. I always felt Prue was kinda repressed and never really said what she was thinking. Nice idea.
- I like that Candice thought that no one could help her so she began packing. It wasn't all that unexpected like everything else in your series, but it definately suited the situation.
- A ball of ice? Would that shatter or kinda envelope her? It just says "hits".
- Okay, this battle scene is what I really like about your series. There is a site which hosts virtual series and well they aren't really that enjoyable to read, yours however is. You are doing wonders with this series.
- Ooh, The MAN has entered the building.
- I really like the way Arcas (?) talks. He's so mysterious and polite. And I think I've said this but I like the way he teleports.
- Prue's all bitchy and Shannen-y. It's kinda funny.
- Hmm, I have a feeling Candice is going to stick around and become a sort of secondary character. I don't want her to become evil though.
- Lmao at the backseat comment. The new Prue kinda reminds me from the 3rd clone from season one.
- The Blue guy vaquish scene was very well thought out, and well cool. I got the whole Fire- Ice thing just now. And how he was an equally strenghed antagonist.
- Great! The Academy is like a beta'd version of Magic school! And it has a better name
- Fire dancer since-- ?? I am really curious about the Academy. At first I thought it was just going to be like MS, but now I think it's different, darker and has a more interesting past.
- Lol at the "You wouldn't believe me if I told you" thing. Some lighthearted humour is always nice in Charmed.
- Oooh, M.E has pyrokinesis. I have a feeling though that this isn't her only power.
- I really want to know more about M.E. I might skip a few episodes and find out. But really, there's no fun in that. So yeah, I'll wait.
Overall good episode. Dark, funny and nicely excecuted.